Too much time skip and battles are not detailed or the mechs. The imagery is weak, and half the time I don't even know where I am in the novel as well; it's too fast and the strength mc gains is so insignificant because of that. This is the first time I ever did a review, and I did this review because the novel's story is pretty crap. Character (especially Mu Shang)and world design are alright though.
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I already read this until chp.250+ before official on qidian,the story is really good no cheat like ability,no op power,but his intelegent make him overpower,i hope this story have good update stability
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