Wish To Get Weaker

The story starts really well and the author makes a really good setting and develops the characters really well at the start. However when the MCs brother, lord and many of his friends end up dying is when it starts going downhill. The MCs character becomes inconsistent, from a pacifistic scientist to a bloodthirsty despot, the rest of the characters just lose most of what makes them good in the first place and become just placeholders, you can see this that the author barely mentions most of the survivors and close friends of the MC for more than a sentence or two. The battles can be interesting enough however, if every victory is a pyrrhic victory after two battles you dont have an army. Now the MC's army doesnt have many casualties later in the series however if you just slaughter your way through a province you plan to rule you end up ruling nobody. In other words the enemies are made to be just created from thin air, coupled with the fact that the start of the story showed us how hard it is from a village to recover from a failed campaign and how the MC knows this, his ruthlessness against what will be his own people are baffling to say the least. Another drop in quality and continuity is the whole monk arc. The author starts the series with a sci fi element, the AI teleports our MC through time to the sengoku era. Then it mostly follows a realistic historical setting, and then all of a sudden we get super powered monks, hidden arts power levels just like any other cultivation novel. And after that ark our MC is basically a god amongst men, he has profound understanding of everything and peerless martial prowess, and of course he trains his men in the same way so now he has an army of ridiculously powerful soldiers, which he recruits in a really filler way ( oh i was coming back from the mountain and they happened to be wandering around teehee). Over time the man from the future that wants a quiet peaceful life just ceases to exist and in his place is a bloodthirsty despot who does not care if he slaughters ten or a million people. Now all this could be how the author planned to have his character end up but personally i dislike the development. Another point i want to make is that in the end the premise of being from the future is just used to give his troops better rifles and cannons and has no other influence on the story. At the start of the novel i was hooked and would have given it full stars, however reading 200+ chapters i cant help but feel disappointment for all the lost potential of this rather unique novel.

Pretty good story! Characters and support are not completely fleshed out but are sufficiently complex and have good dynamics with the MC. And although MC is the cunning, shrewd, shameless type, is not unlikeable or annoyingly lecherous. The story is developing quite well in just few 30 chapters, and the system is mostly a support thing that doesn't get in the story except for a few lines each couple of chapters. This is one of those good novels that rarely appear on the WN selection for a while.

Holy **** dude can you fking explain anything????? Like wtf is happening in this goddamn world? Too confusing but it had potential... truly a pity since the author is obviously inexperienced and getting criticized, but he handled it pretty well by rewriting the chapters, but it still doesn’t make any sense

For an average novel, I give an average rating. This book is your typical cliché overpowered cheat novel. MC has the power to attract overpowered pets and shock everyone. Dumb arrogant character appears in less than 10 chapters, he attempts to 'kill' the main character because main character insulted him. Hence main character attempts to kill him as revenge but ignorant police attacks main character because he has the power to control beast, "He must be a traitor to humans". Then proceeds to attack and get demolished by main character, "Impossible, how could a human achieve this level of power". Stronger guy shows up and resolves misunderstanding, "That cannon fodder attacked our beloved MC first! Ignorant police, you're fired from your job! You are a god-level talent, you need to join our (insert prestigious academy). I will give you money for you to join it". First up, we have no idea how this system work at all, no numbers or anything. Upgrades are thrown here and there and I doubt they are even keeping track of the number of points MC has. To nerf the main character so that the story can be extended, naturally we have to suppress the main character's cheat and instead opt for a god-level potential pet. Naturally since this is a cliché overpowered cheat novel, we need to have absolutely no world building. We'll just throw out the details as the plot progresses. Naturally, I came here having no expectations of this novel. To me, this novel is just some junk food to eat while looking for actually good novels to read. So in summary, your typical cliché novel that can be found everywhere on this website. Good luck finding an actual good read.

I just love the mafia setting and everything in it. A great job you did here Authorkeep up the good work :)Can't wait to read more....

it's a great book actually  and I love how detailed the explanation is as well as its expression. can't wait to read more on this story line

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This your author, sorry for not writing for a long since I felt that I made the MC too OP. Everytime I write, I get confused in the status numbers as there are too many and needed to be accurately calculated but I tried to minimize it as I can. Sometimes I can't make of a single sentence due to focusing too much on the numbers causing some of my phrase to be BLAND.I dont know if I'll post a chapter so maybe, JUST maybe, I'm going to stop