The writing quality is some next level ****, author does a very good job with grammar, general story telling, and the speed at which the story moves forward, not too fast and not too slow. From reading the first few chapters alone you can tell that this author not only has writing experience, but that he puts that experience to good use. The stability of updates so far is great especially for a side project, however it’s still quite early to tell for sure and I can only hope that the author will keep up with this as time goes on. Story development is quite good so far, not too fast or too slow, however this is another one of the things that only time will truly tell.
Dropped.I think this might be the first trial read novel I've dropped before even reaching the paid chapters. I'm sorry, but I seriously could not continue anymore. This is fairly similar to Library of the Heavens, which I kind of enjoyed initially but dropped after some several hundred chapters and could never get back into because frankly it was a pretty trashy novel. But to each their own, and I could understand why people liked it since the face slapping was kinda entertaining while it lasted (I dropped because it got pretty repetitive and it honestly felt like he went out of his way to make people misunderstand him). That being said, maybe I've gotten too old for that kind of writing now.Honestly reading this, it was really freaking cringey and felt pretty unrealistic. The MC has an unreal amount of arrogance and confidence in his ability that I'm not sure where it comes from (the system? his ability to see potential?). I couldn't understand why he took actions that, to me, felt pretty disadvantageous to him and I felt like there was a better way of doing these, but he seemed to prioritize short term satisfaction. In addition, I've never really liked a relationship that I consider unequal (in other words, one partner is considered lesser than the other by others - so the extraordinarily beautiful and talented one and then the untalented frog that lusts after swan meat one). From what I read so far, neither the MC nor his fiancee appealed to me at all and honestly I disliked both of them. With both the main character and the supposed female lead being like that, I really couldn't continue reading.I honestly wish this wasn't chosen. The Secret Agent (despicable and perverted MC but surprisingly very entertaining) or the Senior Brother novel (cautious MC that's quite different from the usual chinese novel MC) were both so much better. I hope either one of these will get chosen later at least, since they haven't disappeared from the trial read yet.
Actually, I don't want to write a review this early but I found this novel quite gems. The MC really cautions in his every action which makes him more smarter than other novels that related to the modern setup.Right now(Chapter 7) there are 2 potential waifu appearing in the story and MC didn't immediately fall in love with them by just their beauty. I think it's good development on this aspect.The other things that I really love it on this novel is its length of the chapters were quite long it should be around 3k words, compared to those 1k words per chap make this novel more readable.I can see the improvement of grammar from the authors every chapter, I hope that you can keep up this good work. Cheers.
This a good novel I don't care what everyone think, everyone makes mistake maybe the autor does make grammar mistake, my opinion is that this is a great novel
Exceeding good novel. The grammar was a refreshing experience for me, so was the plot of the story, less cliche, and the authors has grasped the meaning of the show not tell. I hope you will get what you deserve, a large reader base!
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