I honestly feel it's jumping the gun making the book premium so soon and that's why I've decided to make my review. Slight spoilers btw.The writing can get very repetitive, using the same words and identifiers constantly within the same paragraph. Character and story are also pretty generic. Kid died, got reincarnated, finds out he has a OP system, the works. As far as the MC goes he's about as spicy as flour. No motivation beyond "getting stronger" after they get invaded and he sees his parents die, it's now "get stronger to get revenge". His dialouge and interactions are pretty meh as well.. It's fight scene, talk about how crazy the fighting is during the fight, then eyyyyy I got some stuff, rinse repeat. Conversations are stiff and don't really add much, there is even a section where he and his father do entire conversations from looking at each other. Overall the writing quality is average, the world building is kinda interesting, almost more so than the main story line at times. But at barely 50 chapters with a pretty lackluster story and these issues I feel the author is riding off his success with other novels. His promise of a Mashup of novels seems to be the end goal and to me he's rushing there at the cost of the story.
"God, Kookie, you sound so fucking hot," he growls, resisting the urge to grind his hips up against the maknae's ass. After all, he doesn't know how Jungkook will react to having another man's duck grinding against his back, and he figures that he's pushed their boundaries enough today anyway.
-That is correct, we can not advance unless we are certain our supply line won't be cut, and we have a secure place to fall back -Aidan said honestly -But if you join us, we could control the northen part of the forest without having to break trough by force.
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