this is one of the reviews from novel updates "He had this gf that dumped him to get with rich kid in class, then some things happened and her life went to ****, she ended up as a hooker and then tried to kill him because she blames him for all her problems. Then of course she doesn't succeed, and MC not only not kills her, he also stops his friends from doing so, everyone thought she should be killed but nope, he wouldn't let that happen. Leave her be so that she one day tries to kill him again or maybe harm his friends and lovers. And of course, the girl starts training in this technique that's supposed to make her really strong. So yeah, I expect more bs like this in future chapters so I dropped it"
Pls pick this up, it's killing me that ********** is releasing only 2 chapter a day and they are so short, I do not want to spend 100 dollars for an extra 40 unedited chapter, 100 dollars for 40 chapter now wtf is that, pls pick this up
A rare gem. While I personally will not be spending coins on this I feel that it is very well done. This novel is well written and translated with an original concept.I recommend giving this story a shot. By the time you get through the free chapters you should be able to decide for yourself if you like it.An easily recommended story. Give it a go, you might enjoy it.
The writing quality of the story is probaly the main thing giving it a lower score. It is understandable as in guessing it isnt the authors first language, and it is one of his first works which will result in him not knowing a much descriptive words etc.If the author needs it i can proofread his chapters and rewrite certain paragraphs where i need to. I dont have much experience execpt for about 40 chapters of My vampire system (first 40-50 chaps). Just respond to this review with your discord (Username or server code) or something along those lines where i can give you an example of a paragraph i would rewrite.
The translation is a little rough but this is a charming and whimsical story.....with cats !!!!I think we need some actual adventures but the last chapter sets that up so here’s hoping.Hope the author keeps going.
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