I gotta say this story from what I've seen is worth reading. I'll admit that I'm the beginning the writing wasn't exactly top quality, but as you read through you can see the author's writing improving, for all of you who read the original version and thought it was terrible I would like to encourage you to re-read it. Trying to compare the author's previous writings to the current writings is like comparing the light of a fire fly to the radiance of the moon. So I assure you it is definitely worth reading.
She was, obviously, not as good actress as she thought herself to be, for her anger could still be discerned. However, it had, for the two other people, another meaning. Jealousy. The man's ego could reach the roof as his lips lifted in an arrogant sneer. He was handsome, one had to give him that, and seeing the fancy restaurant, he was evidently wealthy as well -or knew how to fake it, that was good too-; though, there was something in his hairstyle that didn't sit right with her. He had drowned his brown hair in gel, that he had styled in a curly fringe. Maybe, what made her uncomfortable was the fact that it was her father's most favorite hairstyle.
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