@instagram Nathanisontheway4I gave Focus a 5/5 in everything but writing quality. It isn't that I make any major errors, but it seems like I can never re-read through a chapter I've uploaded without wanting to pull my hair out because I made a typo here, or spelt something wrong there. But! if you can forgive an author for constantly spelling dao, doa, I'm sure Focus will be something you enjoy for a long time to come!Aside from my mistakes, Focus has a lot of strengths. I believe the world and lore are all very interesting. There are countless clans and sects, and each has a unique history with each other that pushes the story forward. In terms of character development, Chen rui straight forward as you can get, but it's clear he himself . I also try to give every important character a unique backstory of note that explains their motivations and personality.For stability of uploads, that's something you never have to worry about :) I've been uploading at least 2 chapters a day for the better part of a month now, and the only times I uploaded a single chapter was back when I didn't split my 4000 word chapters in multiple parts. You'll have something to come back to enjoy everyday :)As for the story itself, the second volume will speak for itself. The first was an introductory arc, where we introduce the mc, who he is, his back story, and his first female companion. The second, however, truly delves into the lore of the Focus verse. We have mystery, backstabbing, and plenty of face slapping.I hope you'll all enjoy Focus as much as I enjoy writing it everyday! :)
At first I thought that it was a pretty basic story. After all the premise is pretty know stuff. Still the author is really good. I will always respect those mm who make a detailed system since they cannot make their numbers without thinking. The amount of work required is pretty high. What more as a writer myself, I must say that I'm pretty envious of his battles scene writing skills. They may not be the best but they are already pretty high in the ladder. Good work
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For me to give it a five star! It means I LOVE IT! I'm the worst of all picky readers and I know it so please, if you have been thinking of reading it then get down to business and if you have not been... common give it a try I swear you would not regret it...And It's the character development for me... such a wonderful story, I swear word can't even describe what I want to say
What an unique and interesting story! The beginning of the story is beautiful. The description of emotions is really good. I think is really worth reading! Keep up your good work!
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