Wan Wan Little Smile (Wánwán xiǎo wéixiào)

I think this story is great, but character development and story is too fast. so many days passed like there's nothing unique at all. that's so far.and tags,, it's not pure sport, there's "system" here, and can be said the strongest system on sport

Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice  Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice Nice

Gotta say that this book got a lot of potential... Maybe he will pick hero name ThunderGod Hero: Thorr or maybe somthing more cooler. Please update more chapter on thiss.... This is soo goood  to read.

Deixando uma review BR de responsa,  naquele pique, se outro BR tiver lendo, salve.140141040104104010410401041004104141041014004100140140401140014

I normally never write reviews but well I guess for that story I need to do it.When I started reading this book at first  it was a really bad experience cause the English wasn’t understandable at some points and u were forced to use ur brain to get the lines. I mean my English isn’t good as well cause it’s not my mother language/tongue but the author didn’t even made the he/she or his/her correct BUT the story overall is really really great. The author and the story has a lot of potential. The system is really well thought out. Of course not perfect cause for system novels it’s hard to memorize everything and u will made fails with numbers/math at some point especially if u just started with writing novels ... Overall the author is doing a really good job. I’m enjoying reading this book and want to read more and more (sadly I’m on the newest chapter). So guys give it a try and stop writing on every chapter that the English/grammar is terrible... nobody is perfect 👌🏻 u all know how hard it is to learn a other/new language.

I have been reading this novel for a while now , I really really liked it although its simplicity I had lots of fun reading it , I also liked how the author putting lots of his effort in making such respectful plot , Even the characters he give every character its own role in the plot , Even the fight sequence is great you will have fun reading them , and I loved the dark and psychological part of this novel , how the characters interact with each other you will find it very special with amazing sense of mystery in it , I believe that this novel will be something one day because the author puts a lot of effort in it.

shang'a:what are you talking about! you were the one who trashed me first?!

Adventurer's Guild — Llyne