Hello guys , I am the author of this novel . As the author , I obviously like the story as though it was my precious child no matter the defects. I am an ******* and this can count as my second novels . This novel is published on royalroad as well, under the name of Nimero which is still me . Nonetheless, I want to publish it on this site for a broader audience and also to get a free original cover because I can’t draw one . Lol
Please for the love of God, do not translate this. The best thing I can say about this novel is that the grammar is alright and there are no spelling errors.The story is bad, bland characters, even worse world building and not a single original idea.To regurgitate: The MC is a transmigrator with an OP system, but instead of learning about it or thinking about his future he spents his time pleasing a strange women. He is literally rich and has an OP system. A little patience and he could become a productive member of society, which he does not because he is way to lazy. World building is shit because there is literally no way to become more than dirt without a beast summon. Like any society would function without guaranteeing the survival of the next generation, at least for those moderately wealthy. Hire someone for God's sake. Nothing more gets explained, there is no background or logic in this novel. The MC has the arrogance of a transmigrator, the lack of brain of the worst kind of dick steered beta male and the depression of a total washup. The female characters make no sense, have no consistent background or motivation.Do yourself a favor and do not read this.
I am going to be honest. The plot is both unique and enjoyable. So is how the characters are introduced. The world building is also acceptable; it is generic medieval fantasy. But the writing is truly shit. I know you are contracted and want the money, so you do not have time or intention of going back and editing the earlier parts, but just as paying workers properly and providing them with rest increased production and efficiency in your story, editing those earlier parts will multiply your revenue.
As Satan walked into the room, he could see that it was a conference room, with a large table and... He counted quickly in his head. Twenty three very comfy looking office chairs.
Jumbo, yeah that what I call him his name is.... it doesn't matter what hus name is. anyway we square off face to face. I use one of my other tech to deal with this lo life. I start off with a quick jab left left left and a right hook and it was over. He was out cold on the ground. no contest. why?? because I'm that good.
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