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The overall story is really good and I would recommend people to start reading this BUT I sincerely request people not to read it unless you are made of stronger stuff so as to cope with the plot holes and the machine translation.

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This novel deserves and needs 12+ translated chapters a week. Its much better then those crappy novels being translated at 14 chapters a week. Why is Qidian focusing so much on garbage novels to translante instead of the good novels?

It's interesting, sure, but the characters are flat. The author seems to think that humor or camadre comes from random snippets of party members shouting insults at each other or random nonsensical banter. Consistency was an issue early - either the author or translator did not properly proofread, since repetition of information seems to be contradictory: the AOE sweep skill that was supposed to have gone from 100-200% damage because the MC did a certain quest perfectly is displayed as 200% both times in the story, despite the first instance being supposedly 100. Several other, smaller inconsistencies in dialogue also pop up.The number scaling is also ridiculous - supposedly the number of players in the very beginning were 4 million simultaneously with over a billion after 5 years.... And the 'guy whose uncle works at the company' states that the VR helmets for the game sold 500 million of its stock preorder... Supposing that a super advanced VR helmet that connects to neural pathways was priced CHEAPER than today's high resolution monitor helmets at 500 dollars, and that millions of individual people could afford such a luxury and were willing to pay for it, the company would have just made 250 billion dollars of revenue. In preorders.However, if you can retain your suspension of disbelief then it's entertaining. At least until you get past the first 2 dungeons. The damage scaling doesn't change at all. The MC at level 16 can do 400 damage with his 'super op' aoe ability. Then later after more than tripling his weapons attack and getting a flat 50% armor penetration ability it does 700 damage to regular mobs. Then, despite the MC's perfect knowledge of the boss attack patterns and having party members that are described as being extremely good, being potentially pro level after improving some mechanical skills, they get wiped several times. From dumb mistakes.Overall, not bad.Honestly? Not worth being nearly as highly rated or popular.It has many, many flaws that can be easy to overlook, so might make for a decent read.

Personally, I am not a fan of reading horror stories but I think anyone who likes to read about gore and scary stories then this book might be right for you 🤗💕Keep improving author you're doing alright

Hello! I haven't finished reading this book yet so I can't really say anything about how good it is but as for now I'm really liking this idea hope you don't drop this

This story has an interesting prologue. Even with just the start, this is very hooking. The narration was legit and easy to read. With finishing touches, this will rise above the rest. All in all, a wonderful job creating an awesome novel!