So many unnecessary words.The grammar is terrible, the plot itself makes no sense, the main character is just extremely unlikeable, and the author can’t seem to stop saying things that don’t even need to be said.I mean, Jesus. If the main character makes toast, the author would give an extremely detailed explanation as if babies are reading this. The author is clearly trying to seem smart, wise, and philosophical, but it comes off as annoying, especially when it completely breaks the immersion.One second, the main character will be having a conversation, and in the next second, he’ll start talking to himself for half of the chapter just to come to a single conclusion.
hey ,your story is really n1 to read i found it a few days before.I dont can tell the end direction of your story @ the moment but the setting ist really n1 .I like it because it´s not like this "Normal Gameing Novel" like Legendary Guardian or so.Hope that you can bring more Updates to your novel that i can see your creator Path.mfg Kamu
great book. and believe me this novel is just getting better and better. so don't let yourself stop at some 10 or 20 chp. good stuff begins afterwards. mc is growing and changing.I say try later chp, in case you think you are gonna drop. maybe that will stop you 🙂👍
Marvelous world building. You can easily imagine just how the political structure of the world are being divided by 10 different World Leaders with each of them serving different purpose, having their own diversity, and unique traits that can affect the pace of the story and the future plot revolving around the MC. The story development is kind a bit slow, but it's alright for me I don't know for the others. Keep up the good work my dudes
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Hey!Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to email mollyringdom*@*gmail.com (delete *）We are mainly looking for adventurous novels (Fantasy, Sci-fi, Paranormal Urban, Action, Thriller/Suspense, Game Fiction). A brief introduction along with a few samples or links will be appreciated when reaching out. You might be our next top writer!
In my eyes this is one of ( 1st or 2nd still debating ) the best dragon fantasy books ever I'm so inspired I'm writing a book using this as inspiration it is that good . I absolutely love it I wish I could give 20 stars out of 10.
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