story would be so much better if the MC was not fawning over Zhao Ying. I mean. He should be old enough to not be such an idiot. Or at least to not be attracted to short sighted, vapid girls. I mean. She keeps looking down on him, thinks skills or martial arts are better than intelligience/knowledge. Even when he beats other people in combat she looks down on him. She is always following around his enemy, who is arrogant and like to bully and look down on others... I mean. Either she is not as good and kind as she appears to be, or she is to ****** minded to have any real character of her own with which to express opinions that do not line up with Zhuo Fei Yangs. Honestly, at no point in the story does her character come off as attractive or appealing. I cannot see an intelligient individual actively pursuing or even liking someone like that.
It is enjoyable to read this story as the plot is flowing nicely. The consistency of the main charactets can be maintain properly. I hope the update can be faster.
hello translator can you contact me if you need some help with the translation. the novel already has more than 1000 chapters so if you need some help just text me
45 Chapters? But content has less? Author said he'll be back, but not even a shadow can be seen? Welp, i'm disaponted. First 40chaps, nothing important really happened. Was excited for the coming updates but there was none. Dropped.
TLDR: Needs work but it is still better than most novels on WN. Don't pass it up!This review will be written in three parts, first is an analysis of the story, second will be on the writing style, and third will be the conclusion.Story:Aside from some cliches, and a generic fantasy world, the story is quite enjoyable. Cliches are cliches because people like them, right?I will completely look over the fact the author turned the MC into a 12-year-old boy, though, because it will provide the MC with four years to grow their pool of MP.The MC used Fireball and Inspect, but when creating a "bo
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