Unlimited Wishes. (Re-write)

Knowing the defeat, he quickly bid a retreat, but not before throwing a dirty eye at the young girl. I knew that look, it meant "things were not finished yet". That look meant troubles, and troubles were the last thing I wanted here in this mansion. I glanced out of the windows toward the faint traces of the palace under the night sky. There, Vuong was using his wit, his raw talent and perhaps his cynical view of politics to earn support from the Emperor. Normally, it was a challenge big enough, but he would not do it in the conventional way of the local but using foreign ideas and techniques. It would make the problem even more challenging. The last thing he wanted to have was more burdens on his shoulders.

Without an answer, Zhang Liu looked silently at the other party as his grip tightened.

Review after 1st part of 2nd game endedNOTE: Don’t drop the novel if you are at the end of 1st game, you will be missing out big time!The good:- Lore, Grammar and Fighting descriptions are fantastic.- Amael character development is one of the best I have ever read about. Currently, he is my favorite MC in a novel here, as he is getting more “Protagonist Moments”. Don’t judge him for the first 100 chapters!!!- 2nd game have been full of tension & action between the Main Cast, which is fun and exciting to read and re-read. - John presence in the 2nd game is a mayor plus to the story. Hope he gets an even more relevant role.- Author has improved in what I think is the weakest part of the novel: World- building, Multiple POVs & Foreshadowing. The Not So good:- Villains, Antagonist and Special characters (like Nihil, Raphiel, 3rd goddess, Falkrona Family or Edenis Raphiel’s leaders) should have more “screen time”, even if they are not going to be directly addressed soon. The little cameos here and there add more expectancy to us readers than just mention them from the MC perspective.- At times, it feels like author doesn’t want to drag things more of what he has planned and sometimes that might leave plot holes (like not showing Behemoth’s reaction to Nora’s injuries in Dolphis, Ante Eden reaction to Manuel failing in Zestel or Iris project remaining an enigma) and this make [Event]s feel a tad rushed.- With how many things Sancta Vedelia has to explore and address, I’m not sure if 200 chapter will be enough. - The updating stability was on the slow side with only 1 novel. Now he is working on 2. But one shouldn’t mind waiting if the quality has been as good as the last chapters.One of my favorites books, deserve 5 stars: keep the good work author.

Keep up the great work ! An exhilarating adventure filled with twists, danger, and unforgettable characters. A thrilling journey that keeps you on the edge of your seat!

"Hello, Author-kun here! This is my first book, and your opinions and suggestions are always welcome. Do give it a try! I’d rate this book a 5 because, well, I’m shameless, but you can’t expect me to rate my own book any lower. I really hope you enjoy it and decide to stick around for more chapters!"

I think the author needs to work on the world building, so that readers's can fully understand the setting. However, the plot looks exceptional and even though I've only read the initial part of this book, I can already tell that it is an amazing plot. I'm really curious to see how Grace lives as Prince Quicke🤭 cause I'm sure it would be a trilling read.