Love the novel the only problem is that the upload is SUPER slow................................................................................................................................
Historical fantasy with expanding world background, although not my cup of tea, I could see the care put into crafting those words. I can't really rate it objectively since I'm not used to reading historical fictions, but I could suggest the introduction of character first before the world (it would be better if it's in the same first chapter) so that the reader had someone/something to connect to.
Well I have to say the story is interesting, writing style and humor is good. Currently at chapter 4 I bing read 3 about to go for 4th really good job author
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Hey look! It's a MOBA novel without directly stating it is a MOBA novel. A bit of an up and rising star I found this novel very agreeable in all aspects. Even if it the novel is going through a very typical edgy game novel reincarnation it is still an enjoyable read whilst sticking to that original skeleton. A smart application of clichés Godlike player in a game like world provides me everything I want in a different way than I expect it. A main character sculpted to perfection without extraneous personality traits weighing him down, a supporting cast that doesn't lift the story up nor drag it down and a generally clean cut story in both world background and development that isn't trying to overstep the author's writing skill. This story is a perfect fast food novel (this is a simile not literally a novel about fast food). Thank you author for helping fill the void.
so far so good since there are only 9 chapters published. The story seems to have potential and ML & FL are interesting enough so far (even I must ask, what's with the ML and sunglasses 😎 🙂) I will keep it in my library to see how the story envelopes.
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