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this just copywriting from chinese novel, search 斗鱼之死亡判官 and you will find it, original chinese novel and FREE, if you not mind read it on MTL or Google translate.

Basically a half assed copy of famous novels and manga. School Days, King's Avatar, etc. The MC is a rich "sensible" girl whose only fault is laziness. Yes she was born with a silver spoon that she never forgets to use, no real hardship. It's fine if you never read the originals it references from otherwise it just seems like a lackluster copy. Good for wasting time not good for much else.

Zero to hero? More like zero to infinite propaganda. Every character started to say 'outside nine provinces everyone is barbarian', like dude calm down why do you hate other countries so much and you're writing something like that in a book? If this book was written in another country I'm pretty sure that author would be banned for racism and xenophobia. Probably someone tried to machine translate and edit it with notepad's 'find and replace' but forgot to replace some words so every now and then realms and everything starts to become confusing. MC's character is really awful as well, literally beats 7 year old little girl and amputees her so he can test his abilities on her. If you're into dark/evil mc then it's alright but then he starts saving random people.

The MC is such a pushover with women. He let's them take advantage of him and can't ever go against them...also, as I'm reading more and more of these genre novels, I'm realizing that all you need is a pretty face with a chilly personality in order to use the MC. Is that the ideal type of girl that Chinese guys want?

The very first thing that I noticed when I started to read this were the many grammatical errors. Normally if it's just a few, I wouldn't mind. However, there are enough errors that I had a hard time staying focused on the story itself. The grammar could use quite a bit of improvement. With that said... I do like the Author's creativity with the story. It's definitely something I'm not used to reading, but I would still encourage new readers to give the story a shot.

i like this novel and i hope it doesn't get dropped. i like this novel and i hope it doesn't get dropped. i like this novel and i hope it doesn't get dropped.

Nice story. I like it's development very much.The MC is also smart and intelligent. The background is also nice.What I like the most is the story's plot.Keep it up

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