Excellent start. Nice characterisarions. Thorougly enjoyed every line of the story. Looking forward for the next part. This story will definitely rock. Good luck.
Amazing concept with a lot of potentialBut the author dropped and rushed the ending out of nowhere a bit disappointed but who am I to critique his decision to drop at least he finished his work
The fragment holder is an interesting idea.Hope their would system update in order to expand to other games.Get more skills to support him real life.Also it would interesting adding supernatural to world but that's just my opinion.
free chapter has decreased to 15 now ......................................................................................................................................................................................................
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absolute garbage I wanted to like this story hit I can't I had to give up. things just happen without explanation MC gives up power just because, none of it makes sense all it does is frustrates you. to top it all off this ain't even an evolution novel it's really just leveling/powering up but they call that evolution for some reason smh. sub par at best
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