So this is just a wuick review for more chapters basically, but I'll just add my opinion and suggestions. So base on the chapters that I have read(until ch. 46), it is going pretty good.Pros1. Great grammar - I can barely spot any mistakes in grammar until ch. 462. Realistic Characters - So the characters in this story has a certain depth to them and has some background of their own, in other words they're not like Passerby 1, 2, 3 or A, B, C3. Good Writting Style - From what I have read, the author's writting is comparable to professional writtersa and is very to understand.4. Simple but Clear Worldbuilding - The world building is decent, but still has flaws(ex. The other source of entertainment like games, sports, and etc. should be more advanced as the entertainment is industry is backwards right? So I think it should not be exactly the same). Overall it's ****** and easy to understand as it is just a bit in the future and the situation is the same except for the entertainment industry.Cons1. The MC's First Life is Just Blank - Until ch. 46 I only noticed a few hints of details regarding his first life and although I think that is not really extremely important to the story, but it helps us to understand the MC and why he became like that. 2. The MC's Personality Might Annoy Some People - From an incident in the hotel manager underestimating him and he fights back by humiliating the manager(the standard plot). In this event he may seem annoying to people as some people see him as too petty(personally I think what he did isn't right, however it is the manager's fault for stepping on his dignity first and probably did it many times as well). Inially the MC just wated to treat his friends to a meal.3. Some Character's Personality Might Seriously Annoy You - So some characters in this story, especially a CERTAIN FAMILY AND A CERTAIN SINGER'S personality would seriosly make you mad like I was UGHHHHHHH!!!=&=Β₯Γ#*@Β£. I was soooo fkin FRUSTRATED.Suggestions: - Tone down the annoyingness of some characters.- Don't put too much THOTS in the story.- No Harem PLEASE!- Try to stay orignal and don't stick too much on cliches.-MOAR CHAPTERS.- Don't be discouraged and stay awesome.P.S. If you actually read that then thanks and congratualtions I guess...
Not read yet. But I like farming novels. So I hope this one is good. Here's a 5 star rating.πππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππππ
Me is amused. so i rated 5 stars and gifted 400 ss hehehehe pls more chapters. Ill try to donate more if i can save spirit stones. dont worry on going premium!
I remember reading this story back when the author was going by Flambe. It's just as amazing as it was back then if not better. The MC is a type of xenomorph who ends up stranded in your typical fantasy world which drew me in instantly. I'm looking forward to seeing how it evolves and adapts. Keep up the great work.
Really horrible first impressions here, protagonist is a chinese guy who somehow through some strange magic manages to kill himself with a power outlet, I don't know how he'd do that in this day and age but fine.His name is now Garen and his dad's name is Lombart or some ****, the setting is industrial era europe~esque, or so the story says. Eauropean as in his sister whose name is Ying Er, who goes with him to Shengying Academy in Huaishan City. Person who sits next to him is called Ai Fei, yet strangely his only friend in the world is called Kalidor. Which beats Ai Fei but still sounds more like Warcraft than Europe to me. Just missing an M.Also, there's a bunch of nobles and peasants, cus you know nobles were so important in the 1800s right? (The era where middle class citizens did better than nobles, yet somehow this middle class protagonist is playing second fiddle to a bunch of noble brats...)Let's not forget about the training 'dojos' because everybody loved training with swords when revolvers became a thing right? Not like any idiot knows that firearms are the future at that point right? or that dojos specifically were never a thing in europe...Let's not forget about purple hair, cus people dyed their hair so much in the 1800s (hair dyes weren't really much of a thing till the 1950s), oh and let's not forget about mr. luo ya, whoever that is, but wait there's also a sharmilla. I think maybe that last name could pass for middle eastern, what do you think? Sound european enough yet?Yeah I didn't think so, this author has no idea wtf he's writing. Power outlet? nobody dies to power outlets outside of fucking movies, besides the fact that there's always a source for grounding somewhere around in modern houses (yes even in china) touching an outlet will only shock you and lock you in place for a couple seconds, you'd have to be touching that outlet for like 10 minutes at least for it to do any damage to you on it's own... Only way it could kill you so fast is if ti gives you a heart attack, but typically it won't do that so easily.The premise of the story is greatly flawed and the author doesn't know if he wants to use european names, chinese names or western fantasy names so he just uses a weird mix of all of them to make sure that nobody can remember wtf kind of setting this is in the first place...Idk how I'm supposed to read this. I'm only 3 chapters in man!
Story is slow as hell, chapter 118 and almost no progress still, every major thing that's happening so far is revolved completely around woman even major fights so far are either made by woman or ordered others to do it by women and the talk going on by mc and people in void is all random junk just to fill up the chapter and no actual number is mentioned on how many people are in void so how many people that talk so far may increase to further waste a chapters worth of a read on nonsense that is just ment to waste time for a easy buck.
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