Good story. Enjoyed reading it. Easy to follow. However, the certain sections where the names were changed made it hard to remember who is who. It would be better if you had kept the same name consistent throughout. Which lead to making the story confusing to follow until the old names used again.
Cute story, and plot. It needs some serious editing because the constant name mess ups are sadly distracting. Either have it made into the BTS fanfic it is, or rename the characters and keep BTS out of it.
6 ev points for hearing awareness, really?!, Mc is dumb if he used it for his pet from the start then other people dying can be saved but author made him unwise, hate this type of mc which you think you could do much better when your in the mc’s position
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