Guys i dont get it. I am in v2 ch175 and seveni keeps telling he is too weak to know about her political problems. But this guy has super high durable armours and weapons, lotttt of money, lives in the land of his ally, andddd the support of almost 2 of the 5 great mages in lampuri. What tf does he need more anddd he is also level 7 mage will become level 8 soon. Onnnn top of that he has the support of the dwarfs and elves. He has a fallback place in the duchy where he can prosper. Hell he cann even go to the next country and start anew there and now that magic machines are becoming a trend the other country will accept him with open arms. He has ssso many cards but is still considered as weak? What strong-ass power struggle can there be in a small country like lampuri?
Another thing I would like to criticize is the time gaps. It can be off-putting for the scenes to jump from the first meeting to the present if you're not talking about the background of a character. Instead of mentioning, 'three days later' you can simply tell how those three days have passed
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