two main problems.First is the level of writing quality. English doesn't seems to be his native langue and even for me an french with a not that good level of English grammar, it sting my eyes...The second one is the chaotic amount of techniques. He have so much bloodlines, cultivations techniques, talents at the same time. When you mix both it's very difficult to understand and follow the story.
Short: The Story is vast, which makes it pretty expensive to read, but most of the time it is a good read. The Character makes a 180° somewhere in the early 100s Chapter but otherwise is pretty consistent. Lengthy chapters in the 600s chapters to artificially legthen the story.Writing Quality: The Author is often to forced in his writing, which makes Chapters not that good, but most of the times he gets it done right. After chapter 600 it started to get artificially extended explanations and descriptions. Which serve no real purpose (character or world building)Stability of Updates: The Author tries to hard to match with the requests of his readers to release chapters fast, this in turn did dimish the quality of his writing as above stated. It might be a lack of Editing, but chapters feel about 30% longer than they should be After ca. The 600s chapter.Story Development: The story developes on a steady pace, in my sight a bit to slow, espacially After chapter 600, with to many inbetween chapters that serve not much purpose. But this is not my choice, its the authors choice. This makes the story an expansive read tough.World Background: The World is vast, the author even adds more to it by a method of the System the Maincharacter uses. Is the World fleshed out? not even close, there are still so many Questions about Jin's world and this with 630 chapters into the story.
After I came downstairs I could swear I saw a tiger ripping apart its pray so I looked away and when I looked back again I still saw it but this time I notice it wasn't a tiger but it was Rin and what she was ripping apart was some sausage I had put as a side dish with the egg bacon and for some reason English muffins?
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