Trimentality [Hiatus]

good work please keep writing dear

Boring. The main character is forgettable with no character traits apart from 'poor weak orphan'. The supporting characters are even worse. There are no hooks in this novel that make me want to read further an absolutely disappointing experience.

THE BEST NOVEL I'VE EVER READ WE NEED MORE NOVELS SND AUTHORS LIKE MISS ASHWINI AND ITS VERY INTERESTING I LOVE IT SHE DEFINITELY DESERVES MORE AND I WISH HER GOOD LUCK MORE POWER TO U MISS ASH AND I'M MOTIVATED I'LL TRY TO MAKE A GOOD NOVEL LIKE HER I LOVE YOUR NOVEL ITS PERFECT!!!💘Lia-💘

the first 200 are pretty good but after that the author started rushing the story at first it was still ok but after ch350 the story rushed too much the focus shifted from the family upgrading too fighting demon instantly like how untill his family was level 6 it still shows the family  details but after that there was almost no mention of it again

Best story so far Mr author.Am in dire need of a new chapter soon plzzzzz.I love the everything here.Its just Perfecto I can say.Keep on with the same morale.Love your novel soooo muchhh

Amazing. This is a detailed setting full of death, grim, and suffering. It does not hesitate in being graphical or harsh. Set in a South America controlled by Cartels, this work offers what you love about Latin American contexts and stories. The main character feels highly rounded, and although he is literally nicknamed The Grim Reaper in Spanish, he is not a psycho, blood-thirsty machine without reason nor will. The leader of the Guerreros is a highly charismatic character that always leaves you wanting more of him. Highly recommended work. The grammar is flawless, the flow is consistent, and the scenery and action scenes are very well described. This goes to my library.

"This story is a masterful blend of fantasy, adventure, and political intrigue. The world-building is rich and immersive, with a complex cast of characters that will keep you guessing. Anthony's journey is fraught with tension, action, and heart-wrenching moments that will leave you breathless.The writing is engaging, with a perfect balance of dialogue, description, and action. The plot twists and turns, keeping you on the edge of your seat as alliances are forged and broken, and secrets are revealed.The themes of loyalty, family, and power are expertly woven throughout the narrative, adding depth and complexity to the story. The characters are multidimensional and relatable, with their own motivations and backstories that add to the richness of the tale.Overall, this story is a must-read for fans of fantasy and adventure. It's a thrilling ride that will leave you eager for more. I can't wait to see what the next chapter holds!"

Delacroix rubbed her head under his chin and settled down with a hum. Nahmeh smiled at the gesture and began to walk down the street towards the castle where the Council waited for them.