Tourism Record of the Origin Dragon

This is the rewrite of my first original novel. I am changing many things and I believe I can craft a much better story this time around.Feel free to ask questions below this review!

The start is interesting, one of few i cause say that stand out, good pacing, immersion is dangerous I almost finished all the uploaded chapters in one sitting

Funny MC and The world building, no a game building is good! keep updated, please!                                                                                             

You'll never know if you don't go (go!)

"Let's all eat!"

Throughout Muri's explanation, Tsuneyoshi stayed quiet and listened as he concentrated all his energy on healing himself. "How? How did you gain the ability to have and use that monstrous kagune? I noticed your brother, Kaiko and the rest of his men seemed to also possess it even though they're half-humans. Half-humans are not meant to have kagune. Explain to me how this happened?" Tsuneyoshi calmly stated as he suppressed his chaotic state of mind, one could notice a hint of greed in his eyes. Muri inwardly smirked but put on an expression of innocent realization, "Oh Yes, I almost forgot. Father you wouldn't believe what's going on underground, the entire 24th ward has been united under one organization. While I was working under brother he took me to their headquarters as he was working with them. Turns out they kidnapped those cadets for some horrendous experiments. They've developed a way to turn non-ghouls into ghouls. I have no idea how since I was knocked out during the operation but I woke up with the feeling of having extra limbs and a new movable muscle in my body. Also I overheard how they developed a serum to brainwash and control the artificial ghouls though I'm not sure as it could have just been a lie but there has to be a way they're keeping the new artificial ghouls under control. Luckily it wasn't used on me since I wasn't a member of their organization. They also performed the procedure on Kichimura, Kaiko and several of his most trusted men. Brother was gonna allow them to take over the entire Northwestern area of Tokyo and expand to the rest of Japan in return for their cooperation.  I also overheard the man behind the discovery has built up an army of brainwashed and loyal artificial ghouls. We're going to need a lot of bodies and weapons to take them down since they're situated at the depths of the 24th ward. Imagine if the Washuu Clan had its own army of truly loyal artificial ghouls, however we'd make our own own much larger. After all we have the resources to create and support such a large force, no one would be able to stand against us. Also did I tell you about how the procedure rejuvenates the body. Kichimura told me it made Kaiko's internal body structure younger and increased his lifespan." Muri humbly spoke on the subject, mixing lies with truths as he fed honeyed words as bait into his father's ears. Somehow Muri he knew he had his father already. Hook, line and sinker.

I, especially on a March afternoon, don't usually have any problem with hailing a cab however, this particular day, it was just hell. Today was the day set for the rally. It's on the vice-president's visit, and because the whole university is divided on the ordeal, a rally was set up. Supporters, opponents - different sides of the same dirty coin - all came and shouted in unison how one side is dumb and how theirs isn't. This was cool and everything, but each time I called a cab, the same hoard of idiots would try to block its way and force their placards on the poor driver's windshield. 1 cab, 2 cabs, 3 cabs have come to past and I just wonder: why don't they just run 'em over?

After offering their respects to the grave that was no more than a pile of rocks, the vagabonds began to move once more. They have already depleted the resources in that particular area. Even beasts and faros could no longer be seen around.