Too close to realise

It was my first English novel, so there would be a lot of flaws in it. If you think this novel readable then please continue, but if you think the English in the novel is too bad to interrupt your reading pleasure, then stop reading.English is not my mother tongue, but one of the ways to improve English is to keep writing and reading. Because it's hard for me to improve English if I have to stop writing this novel.The background of this novel is an alternate reality with references of players from the real world. I apologize if there any fan of a club or a player was offended by my writing.

Best story. Slow Start. Fun Read. Completely Hooked. Enjoyable. Fascinating Look into Culture of the Ancients.

Gotta say this book is amazing, I love it great job Author keep it up love the amazing work , The characters are amazing good plot too .keep it up!!

so another book by ChanduGod...noice start and have great potential! don't drop it and release more!! 🥵🥵hope it is a good harem like martial transcendence.

Honestly, I was looking forward to reading this novel and it greatly disappointed me.You're thrown right into the book without any introduction or build up. Theres practice no logic. like how did he end up meeting the Duke? how does he buy weapons and arms from earth? (no description or story of the actual earth)MC is really concieted and quite stupid. if you want something that has actual sense and world devotion read empress gigglo (Mc has the power to transfer between world and uses it to improve that worlds civilisation)

If you have a passion and look for a book about dnd than i ask you to leave because as long as you are somewhat familiar with dnd and played some this book will make you cringe hard. 40 chapters in and i can say that translators knowledge about dnd is nonexistent, while authors could only be described as superficial at best. The book is set in modern Earth where MC often travels to different "virtual" dungeons to kill monsters and gain loot. The story is filled with videogame references and humour but is not excessive. The MC has normal view on life and stable personality. While overall it's not a top tier book it has it's own charm and good points so I recommend it to read for people interested in world-hopping genre.

There is no pacing at all in this novel. One minute we are in a scene, the next, it jumps 4 months later or a couple weeks later. It's just not good. Time jumps are all well and good if they are done right...this..this is not done right.

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