The author's thoughts are undoubtedly beautiful. The story seems promising and intriguing right from the beginning. The alpha's character is powerful and I am hoping it would be full of surprises too. This is a good read and recommended as well. Just some punctuations needs to be taken care of and everything else is just top notch. Cheers to the author! I am hoping to read your work further.
I really liked reading this and hope that you keep writhing more, i liked the part where he is grinding his skills...........................................
AUTHOR WHYYYYY?? Why did you make this so good that it makes it hard to find stories like this.....Def in top 5 easy.. I have read 1400+ mangas and 600+ cultivation and fair share of LN and this is easily in top 5
i apologize for my 1st review sayin this is a funny but trash.if you only read till ch 60. yes it is funny to read but with weird direction.like the saying "curiosity killed the cat"im curious about where the story gonna go from ch60 so on.so i search for mtl site.and after i read until ch500i find this book become a gem.probably the author at beginning still cannot find direction, but from ch300 the story begin to pick up. so many sentiment in the story, so much feeling, and of course so many plagiarism lol.but the author can bring me to feel more emotion, a few chapters above ch500 makes me shed a little tears.but so great.since English not my main language, i don't really mind reading from mtl site.but others probably wont be comfortable reading there.and i hope this can continue.this is a gem, such a waste if this book burried because of the first 60chapters.
I haven't really noticed anything racist. The MC mindset is stuck in a very rigid and class oriented world view, but nothing obviously racist.What I don't like about this is that the MC is literally wasting his life until the cheat arrives and then goes on a power trip. He literally skips entire stages of development and does not realize it.The MC has not shown a single redeeming quality, he only depends on his cheat. Without it he would be a less than mediocre and if you look at the way he grew up you noticed that he has entirely been shaped by circumstances.I don't doubt that he is an okay guy, but as a character he is neither interesting nor complex.
One man army is 187 on the other pirate site, your not gonna update? ..The other thing that I have to go to finch west is a great. If not a cry baby or easily angered by the fact that I have a lot of people. Are you guys are just too much of a guy, raise your head and RIP mc is a great if not a good read. This way too much and he doesn't seem to be able to get you to do the same as you do you have to be a little dick and you can make it even more painful to be a part of the galaxies and the world of gumball xxx is a great if not a good thing. The other day and it is more like an hour and a half a million times.
<p>He looked back at the window and ran towards before jumping to out of the skyscraper. He turned around and webbed higher up before slingshoting himself into the air.</p>
Raven looked at her another long moment before turning his head to look out the window. He could see outside, but it seemed sort of distorted. "Are we in another dimension?" He asked, comprehending what it was almost immediately.
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