The start was insanely good. As the story progress however, the plot became riduculously dumb. Wasted potential, not reccommended if you still want to keep your braincells.
If it wasn't for the boring and stereotypical character design, this could be one of the better novels on this platform. Most characters are one dimensional and made to hate/like them. Nice/intelligent people are beautiful while the bad/hideous/dumb guys are fat. This huge flaw drags the whole novel down. It's quite a disservice to the interesting and thought through start that this novel had.I hope that the author will pu more effort into his/her characters because this series clearly has potential.
advantages :1_the writing quality is good 2_ the story isn't fast-paced with too op character 3_the world background is acceptabledisadvantages 1-the main character intelligence is trash on par with greed from overheard no no even greed is more creative than him 2_main character is supposed to be top 40 or something gamer but the way he use the ability is find limited and there is no creativity 3_the author force the story by making main character doesn't use his status although he is facing powerful organization that_as author described_ can take small nation by a bat and human strength with some ****y abilities and a mask so I dropped it not my cup of tea at least greed was humorous this doesn't deserve more that 3 stars
Our MC transmigrated after being the last one to log out of a game aka instant karma. Stereotypical plot, Orphaned and has a sick sister, the world is against him, blahnik, blah.
For someone without writing experience you did great. Am able to understand everything. Leon's life is quite sad and I wonder what will happen to him in the future👍👍....am really curious 😟
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