Yeah it's good I highly recommend the novel, not because the mc is highly talented, or is a master of gender equality but because this is one of the few novels were the mc actually grows up and stops acting like a brat, or copy and paste one directional young master from cultivation novel. Another thing is the mc actually has standards so he isn't attracted to every pretty woman that walks, talks and breath, so you won't be see any nonsense about a jade like beauty with no relevance to the story what so ever managing to capture mc heart by being a tsundere or just being conveniently there. If anything this mc has never hesitated in killing people whether male or female he won't even give them a chance to argue before they die what a man. Again the best part of this story is the development of the mc as a whole and how he comes to reflect on his own stubborn personality and actually tries to be better. If anything that in itself is the most satisfying thing about this novel.
The grammar is pure cancer.
Illegible.
Half words are left and stuck together.
Example:
He finished. After...
Is written as:
He finishfter.
Not to mention the author uses no pronouns.
Literally uses the mc's name 9/10 sentence.
Example:
Yassine looked in horor. He thought this was a spirit. What should he do?
Is written as:
Yassine looked in horror. Yassine thought this was a spirit. What should Yassine do?
For everything. Everything.
Does it get better? Its pure brain damage.
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Illegible.
Half words are left and stuck together.
Example:
He finished. After...
Is written as:
He finishfter.
Not to mention the author uses no pronouns.
Literally uses the mc's name 9/10 sentence.
Example:
Yassine looked in horor. He thought this was a spirit. What should he do?
Is written as:
Yassine looked in horror. Yassine thought this was a spirit. What should Yassine do?
For everything. Everything.
Does it get better? Its pure brain damage.
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