Napangiti lang ako. Pansin ko agad ang pagkabulol at hilig mo sa umm, lalo na ang pagkamot mo sa ulo. Hindi sa may kuto ka pero mannerism mo na ata talaga iyon kapag nahihiya.
Papalabas na ako ngayon nang school dahil magkikita daw kami ni Zach my lo.... ay joke lang pala yun. May mahalaga daw kasi siyang sasabihin sa akin. Nang malapit na ako sa gate ay biglang sumulpot si Steven sa harapan ko at hinalikan niya ako. WTF!!!
<p>"Oh my, Young Mistress, you're back..." The girl was drenched in sweat from running hastily. Her tiny face was red from running and there were tears in her eyes.</p>
Hello author here, this is my very first story pretty much ever in my life never written before. So please let me know what you think of it even, even if it’s bad I do not mind. Thank you and enjoy.
Firstly, the story is interesting and we feel the author put a lot of efforts to create a complex and complete world. The characters are not yet well developped, BUT this is because there is not yet enough material to do so (only 16 chapters at the moment), and we can see there will be character developments soon in the future. The MC is OP but restricted with the use of his power, which will give a good development of the story.Secondly, the author has a good writing, english is not my first language but I can see there is not (or very little) gramatical/spelling/conjugation error.So I really recommend to read this story if this is the kind you like (of course everyone has their own tastes)
Hmm the synopsis was really nice, it got me hooked. The first chapter was good start. Really well-written, and the story development is good so dar and I like the main character.
Honestly surprised because I saw this novel a week ago with only 1-2 chapters, and didn't expect to see it again with 25 chapters? Good sign for me means the updates are AWESOME really like it so far-----
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