An interesting direction for a virtual world novel, has good consistency between short time skips and understanding the projects that happened during them. along with a young man discovering his interests in engineering and having the freedom to move on his own.
Another 4chaoter novel... Seriously, did you guys discuss with each other before agreeing to post only four chapter? Come on.... I can't give a good review apart from it give me the feel of "I thought the world is weak, but suddenly plot smack me in the face"...
I can't say much here, but if you read the sypnosis, you should know about the story, it might not be as exciting as you thought of it and I apologize for that, I truly lack of experienceAnyway, enjoy my novel!
This is a review of the first four chapters. In this story, the main character takes a detour on the way home from school and ends up in a supernatural world. He then desperately tries to escape from this supernatural world, but he keeps being pulled back. The plot is scary, but the numerous run-on sentences and other grammatical mistakes dull the shock.
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