This Love Is Not Real

I read until 75.The novel startet on the strong side, few grammar errors aso. so all in all something I'd like to read. Unfortunately the more I wrote the worse the quality of the story became. Grammar was still on the strong side, but characters didn't make sense anymore(including the mc) and I couldn't really identify them anymore based on their actions. Initially I tried to fel into them but it became impossible.The author mentioned multiple times how busy his job is and that he doesn't have much time so I guess there was less and less planning and thinking and he just rushed out chapters to match his schedule... which I guess is also a noble trait but unfortunately the story suffered under it and I can't enjoy it anymore

These are short stories that on equal parts cater to the guilty pleasures of the readers but also manage to run a chill down your spine and make you hold your breath while reading. The title of the book does not lie - All these stories focus about love that it a little strange, a little disturbing. Sometimes just in the eyes of society, sometimes downright criminal. It is nothing for the faint-hearted and some chapter should maybe get a trigger warning. But here I am, marvelling at how the author again managed to play with my emotions. So fellow readers, read at your own discretion. You are in for a ride;-)

Jens : "I see… Thank you very much Echidna."

"He's dead... Everyone is dead." She had no idea why, but when she said that her heart clenched for some reason. She saw the man ignore her yet still dug as if his life depended on it. She watched on for a few minutes before shutting her eyes and sighing as she thought he was getting nowhere. The man was simply in a fools dream. There was no way a anyone could survive in that pile of rubble. His oxygen was cut off from the outside world, not to mention that the debris should've killed him.

"You are so lovely." Before he closed the gap between them and covered her lips with his. The kiss was rough and wild, assaulting her upper and lower lips, biting her whenever he feels excited. She cried and moaned at both the pain and pleasure she feels from their kiss. He was punishing her for what she did, and she knows it. Her mind was telling her to fight back but her body became weak, the pain building up on her abdomen due to his kiss and also his touch. His one hand now behind his neck, paralyzing her into submission, while the other exploring her naked back and waist.

Jack didn't know why, but when he listened to his words, his heart begins to feel warm... And his vision became a little blurry? No! Don't cry, he told himself mentally. But looking at that normal smiley face only makes him feel more like he have been looked after by a caring father. Luckily, Korosensei reminded him once again.

"You have a balance speed, power and defence. That's good to know." The man swings his sword from below Naota. Naota jumps again and attacks the man with his blade. The man blocks himself. "Another good move, you have good fighting sense too." The man says with a grin.

I make a break for it, running away from the troll's range of attack.