This Little Girl

my favourite author

The writing is so blah. There is no feeling, no emotion at all. Feels like a fleshed out outline. You can read this but don’t expect much.

very little of the book has been uplaoded and it is very interesting tbh. I didnt expect it to be this honest but the name of the book was very intriguing and I would definitely read more!

If your new to web novels you will probably like this novel. those of you like me who have read dozens this novel probably isn't for you. The best way I would describe it is everything seems really shallow at best. it has no depth to it and the writing is subpar compared to most decent novels. Every sentence has to much or to little. With the writer adding completely pointless info into almost everything. just one example being "mask of mischief what a peculiar name, Long chen thought in his mind as he went threw this knowledge." is there a need to add in his mind. can't be "mask of mischief what a peculiar name, Long chen thought as he sorted out the information he received." idk maybe the writer thinks most people are to stupid to figure out that thought takes place in the mind and we cant make that connection without reading it. that's just a small example. Wouldn't be a big deal except you find things like that in almost every sentence and paragraph. Every time he thinks to himself his names long chen but anytime he talks to someone or vise versa it's long tian. another problem instead of using pronouns like he, him, his they use long chen almost every single time. long chen got up in the morning as long chen looked in the mirror. long chen thinking to himself yada yada yada like that. its unbelievably frustrating. Pick a name and stop using it so much it seems like the author believes every time they do there saving a childs life.           

Good story. Keep it coming guys. Good story. Keep it coming guys. Good story. Keep it coming guys. Good story. Keep it coming guys. Good story. Keep it coming guys. Good story. Keep it coming guys.

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You really have a talent in writing. I love your story, this is new to me reading a story like this is a mind blowing having this kind of situation is not easy so I keep waiting an update thank you I really enjoy your story.