It's a good novel. I don't currently have the energy to write a proper review so I will just say my thoughts.Writing quality: I'm not a native English speaker so I can't give a 100% accurate review but I think it's good.Story development: It's still very early in the story so there isn't much to say but it's currently pretty good.Character design: The Mc with how he views everything is very irritating in the beginning. I know that he only views it as a game but his lack of interest in the "lore" and complaining about how realistic the game is. It's just very irritating to read. The other characters are good but they lack enough chapters to get fully developed. Still, they are all mostly enjoyable.Updating stability: It's currently good.World background: The world-building is good but the system appears to little. He doesn't have any status screen. While he can get missions there isn't any specific way how. There also barely exists a way for the Mc to consistently grow stronger.Another small problem that will be solved in the future is the game itself. From my understanding, it's a real world and multiple copies of the game were sold so shouldn't he find other players? That is of course unless his exclusive copy was the only one that let someone enter the real world. Still too little is explained about the game itself and those that sold it. Not that it's a real problem since it will be explained in the future.
The humble author is here Tags of the novel System , world building , adventure , romance , Domination , revenge , action . Thank you all for giving this book a try . ****************************************
What can I say......I am absolutely loving this novel.Good storyAlthough there are few character introduced due the novel being at starting stage the characters written/made are too good till now.I hope their will be some netori/stealing wife(mi*lf).Salute to Author.Keep it upAnd thank you
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This novel isn't for me. The MC is stupid with no common sense with a focus on getting revenge. Like every other paragraph MC will say something about revenge. Then every other paragraph MC will talk about why MC didn't get a army or some OP ability for free with no effort when in real life any normal person would not even think about get an army or whatever OP from the start an just be grateful with what they got. I really don't know how this got many 5 star reviews. Though the writing quality is great, while there are many chapters which are long enough to my liking. Still I can't read this anymore.
I wish u best of luck for ur story and carry on writing so.... Might u can achieve the desires or wishes u have in mind and the thought u r having... God bless u āY child šš
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