The god devourer

This novel is an absolute KINO work. I'm not fond of writing about what isn't in a work, but rather, what is in a work; however, it should first be established that LoTM is devoid of most of the commonplace tropes you find in CN novels. Of course, if you examine it closely, you'll find that it does indeed adhere to some frustrating qualities. Namely, the constant "SASUGA FOOL" and the mental gymnastics Alger especially will go through in order to achieve the requirements for a certain plot point to occur. Nevertheless, these problems are, for the most part, unrealistic at worst, but still within the scope of being believable. All of the major characters in LoTM have well-established traits and personalities, along with motivations. Derrick has his naive-and-steadfast character, focused on freeing his home-city from its foggy jail; Alger has his mature and experienced, sometimes overthinking personality; and of course, Klein with his constant lampooning. Also Klein's stepping counterclockwise four times. And also his tapping his glabella twice. An especially noticeable trait about LoTM's major characters, in comparison to most CN novels, is that they all progress. Not just in terms of their "cultivation" (named Sequences in this novel), but also their personalities. A fault I do have to give, however, is that the development is extremely slow for many of these characters. Of course, that's a given, given the length of the novel. Still, it is somewhat irksome.In regards to the story development, LoTM excels in this regard. There is never a moment where you feel that one scene or event is out-of-place, and you receive a sense of gratification when Klein, or any of the characters, really, manage to piece one event with another using in-world knowledge that was previously already provided. For the most part, the story has either action sequences, or sequences with Klein/others planning/thinking/conjecturing/lampooning about matters. When you have the odd occasion where it's a sort of "filler" chapter, you don't really feel that it's out of place for the most part, as most of the "filler" chapters are there to relieve the reader out of the constant action - and when not doing that, to develop a character some more. And I use "filler" in quotations because, later on, almost all of these chapters will 100% not be filler, as they will have some meaning later on. This is a writing technique used by the author I've never seen before in any other webnovel, in which he uses even "fluff" chapters to insert meaningful information that will tie in together. It's amazing.As for the world building, this novel has one of the best I've seen in my entire life - whether that be in regards to web novels, light novels, or even well-acclaimed stories from the West. It's hard to summarize without an entire novel to write, but in essence, LoTM's lore really does make you feel as though you're reading about the story of a person who is actually real, in a real other world. All the sects/churches/gods and their supernatural backgrounds and lore tie in very neatly, and if you check out the wiki, you'll find that there is boundless amounts of information about the world that was very obviously all planned out by the author from the start.Another incredible detail about LoTM is the amount of settings in which it contains. The story takes place in many different locations, from your "atypical" victorian-era city which is actually full of secret supernatural gangs, churches, and pirates, all the way to the City of Silver, which is separated from the rest of the world and at the technological level of a medieval age. This is in most part due to the varying amount of main cast members in the story, as well as another major point about the MC which I won't talk about because spoilers. And just in case you're worried, none of these locations are forgotten about. In LoTM, there is no "other region" full of more advanced versions of previous characters like in CN novels. Characters of all varying power levels, straight from the middling novice Sequence 9 to a Sequence 4 (already beginning to enter Godhood) can be placed in the same city. This means that the main characters in LoTM will regularly go between new places and old places in its world.Lastly, I should talk about the thematic elements in this story. That's right, thematic elements! Unlike many other online web novels (I know I've said this many times), LoTM contains actual themes and ideas around its narrative. The first volume, "Clown

What is going on with the pacing...Also, him being a scientist have 0 relevance to the development of the story after rebirth. For someone that was betrayed by someone he loved and saw his entire colleague die with him, his actions seem too carefree and thoughtless.It's a typical facesmacking and admired type protagonist.

i honestly don't understand why this novel is the second in trending ranking. it start good but the development and the interaction is worsening as the story goes.

Same as many other novels i had the unfortunate experience to read today just waste of times and low effort not getting anyone to edit or spell checker sites you perfect your synopsis and first ch then after that you stop caring and its dumb just dont write ag that point sorry if this is harsh but i have many other novels like this in my library that i read one after the other from intrest to be let down

Amazing story, this actually cured my cancer and my dead mother was revived from the grave the moment I opened the page. The luck of the gamer was transported to me, I won the lottery shortly after too frfr

The writing of the story is superb, easy to read and the descriptions are really well defined. The story itself is intriguing with elements of RPG on it. The author is well versed on his style in writing and I can tell of the experience and mastery of the language he uses. All in all, I give this novel a perfect 5 because I have seen such skill of writing the author possess. Keep up the good work author!

Hey everybody, author here, this is my maiden voyage with a novel. A lot what you read will be edited (imperfectly) by me so I only implore you to read and give me any feedback and reviews you can on Evolve... And thank you for taking the time to read.

Akio readily nodded, this was just a tempering exercise for him anyway. "I can locate my brother fairly easily they both should have travelled together." "Good my father would kill me if anything were to happen to the little rascal." He smiled sinisterly "Let's make this a bit more interesting" Hajimi pulled out a hammer from what seemed like empty air. Akio was instantly surprised and thought to himself. "A space ring? Looks you did have a bit of fortune Hajimi! I won't lie and say that I'm not envious I still only have a space sack." It seems that he did come across a fortunate encounter, Akio's surprise only lasted a second and it didn't show on his face. Hajimi smiled in embarrassment "err, thank you brother Akio I was extremely fortunate I slaughtered the silver bandits leader and he had this thing on his body." Afterwards Hajimi hammered away two fifth rank demon beasts comparable to mid foundation establishment the force of his strike quite literally sent the bodies of the two beast crashing into several trees never to get up again. Akio wasn't to be outdone either a long white sword was pulled out of his space bag and he used it to chop a fifth rank beast clean in half there wasn't even a speck of blood on the blade after.