The Vampire's Deal

I'm really disappointed. reading a few chapter and i lost interest already.he's op from the very beginning. awful story🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮🤮

The story is an action pack, every chapter is as intriguing as the last. Characters are very relatable. If you are up for a little adventure then this story is for you.

Just started reading the novel and even though the English is a little messy the intent is clear and I am sure in time the author will improve in this area. The novel is the usual reincarnation with a system storyline however it definitely isn’t of the same style, after all having to score 7 maidens and wed them otherwise it’s game over player, has the pressure on from the beginning. I won’t add to much but suffice to say the author has indeed gotten a decent storyline and I hope he continues with it to the end.

The story is about a boy, who is trashed by the vampires, become a vampire himself. And obviously, he's going to start his revenge.I hope that the author can add some mysterious elements in the future. If you are a casual revenge story fan, this novel would be enjoyable for you.

Damn, you need to read this story.So the story starts with are mc who looks plain at first sight (he is a doctor not plain at all) who doesn't seem to know what is happiness? Is he really satisfied with his life? He is always trying to measure his happiness from his moms perspective. But one day when his sister comes back home after a year she discloses a secret. Will this secret change  his life for better or worse? Let's know his journey through the beautiful Story.Writing Quality - I really like author's writing it feels like we are living with the characters in those moments. I could feel the tension between the mc and his sister when he was dropping her.Story development - The pace might seem slow sometimes but those scenes really are there to give depth to the character.Character design - All the characters aren't just character in the novel we come across them in real life mc's close friend, the single mother who doesn't like people pitying her, mc himself who feel indebted towards his mother.World background - It was refreshing to read about different cultures and country's. The author didn't shy away from world building. Will i recommend this story? Yeah, it really made me think for a moment. I from the start was skeptical about mc's sister as I thought of her as someone frivolous but as the story went further her side of story was told. I failed at judging both daughter and mother, so I recommend not doing the same mistake.Keep up great work author. ☺️👍

「What? 」

Hopefully you still update this fanfic...Very curious

Thrishul turned towards Punya and asked "Are you sure there's nothing Punya?"