The Undead Alpha

If I have to put this novel in words then I’m afraid I would have to disappoint you. Words alone cannot describe this amazing story and it’s better if u just read the chapters.

A amazing book I wish you would’ve went into more detail at how things are towards the end but a very good book

Overall a good read.  The end was a bit abrupt - it felt rushed and compressed why could have been another 10+ chapters into 2-3.  Enjoyed the read, but I was left feeling like it lacking at the end.

The story is well-written but the editing needs a lot of work. A lot of the chapters are duplicated or completely out of order, so it pulls you out of this awesome story because there's missing chapters early on. I'd recommend it more if it wasn't so confusing to read, especially the two part chapters. Authors/editors should re-check the posted chapters and fix them, it's such a good story it'd be a shame to have it suffer due to such a simple oversight that could be easily remedied.

I am Confused, is the novel chapters arranged correctly??

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