The Story of Azuka

No word came out of Miyano's mouth.

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story and MC development very slow like 🐌..when i read the first chapter i think the Mc will be powerful because he have a cheat system but it make me disappointed 😑..i only read until chapter 18 and then stop. .why! because the MC so weak a dozen chapter  already but the mc still tier 2 lifelifeform..ant mc!!!and don't make no-harem novel if you put it full of women around the MC..it just me want to cry!  F**KNG MC YOU SUCK A ST*P*D MC. .haiyaaa. ..my bad. .hihisorry my bad word and no grammar on my review ..😀

1.Slow pace needs time-skips.2.The MC is still a 5-year-old after almost 100 chapters.3.Too many unnecessary fillers.4.Excessive focus on background characters.I enjoyed the first 20 to 30 chapters, thinking it was just setting up the story and anticipating a time skip. But oh boy, was I wrong. We're 100 chapters in, and there’s still a ton of unnecessary filler. This novel seems more focused on background characters than the main character.For example, there are 50 to 70 chapters of random mining for mana stones—completely unnecessary. This could have been handled earlier in the story or skipped altogether. Instead, we get a drawn-out sequence that feels like it’s there just to pad the novel. And the whole "killing people with snakes" arc feels like a convoluted way to stretch the story without adding meaningful progression.Even worse, after 100 chapters, the protagonist is still a 5-year-old acting like a full-grown adult. I get that this is a fantasy story, but even fantasy needs some realism. It’s becoming boring. You could skip 10 to 30 chapters and still feel like you haven’t missed anything—that’s how painfully slow the story is.The writing itself is solid, but the pacing and unnecessary padding make this novel feel disappointing. It could really benefit from a rewrite or a significant cut to its length.

This is a turn-your-brain-off type of book. Or else you might lose some brain cells reading this stupid novel.

Actually, I felt a little bored in the early chapters, but the author's descriptions and writing style helped me visualize everything in my mind. The more I read, the more interesting it became... Nice work author... I hope you can update every day...