The story has an interesting premise, but the way the mc is acts is nothing short of a letdown . He doesn't want to survive with the way he acts and talks . The only reason he'll survive in the future chapters is that i speculate , is through sheer plot armors.
You took good care of making the script catchy since the beginning. That gave me wanna read the next chapters. I follow the adventures of Eram with pleasure. Just make sure you correct all the typos in the early chapters. Take your time and reread your work prior to publishing it. I left a lot of comments. Don't hesitate to reach out to me, I'm happy to exchange.
this novel has an interesting concept and great depth. the story feels like of a methodology and it is rare to seem stories like this which is good.whe I read athaven I remembered a noevk which I read before but u paused it at about 700 chap. it talked about all heaven battle field. and it's a trilogy. I recommend u to read it. it is not soo similar but was a good read like your.
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