First time posting a review (but this also means it's the first time I found a sorta new book worth giving a review to)Starting with the writing quality, it's got good grammar, decent sentence structures which are not too long or short and no typos.The story pacing is decent, there's no rushing into different plots and there are no unfinished plots or loopholes either. The story continues steadily which fits the character well.The character design itself is amazing. MC isn't dumb, he can think and avoid attracting trouble (like when he gives spirit stones only to extract, doesn't upgrade cultivation level, hides level and conceals power) and can react to difficult situations (as proven in with the 'sword thief'). He doesn't rush blindly into situations, nor is a cowardly rat.He makes amazing use of his system and must I say that this is the best system in existence, to the point that I was insanely jealous of MC at one point. The world setting is a simple cultivation world but it fits the story perfectly as overcomplicating the world would only disrupt the casual vibe the story gives off.All in all, this book is amazing and I keep looking forward to chapters. To the author, pls never stop updating this book until completion and thanks a lot for this top-quality content.
One important thing is: THE MC IS HORRIBLE, AND DISSAPOINTING, HE ONLY CARE FOR HIS KIDNEY, ALWAYS JUMPING AROUND THE GIRLS, THOSE GIRLS ARE HORRIBLE TOO THEY ARE USELESS IN THE STORY. AT FIRST IT WAS INTERESTING BUT NOW I'M REGRETTING TO HAVE SAID THAT.
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When the two items inside Ben reached his consciousness realm, the King piece which looked like a normal chess King piece influenced by the mutated energy got mutated itself and turned into a miniature King like purplish black sculpture. The crimson-coloured Holy sword on the other hand also turned into a miniature form of itself and went into the hands of the sculpture and settled in its hand. When this happened, the whole piece turned bright purple gold in colour with a crimson sword in hand sprouting a pair of wings which seemed to a dragon's and same purple gold in colour. If anyone now saw the King piece, they would not think that it was mutated from two different entities but a single entity formed in that shape.
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