Writing quality = 3Story = 3Characters = 3Final classification = 3.6- There are many times that the author makes many lines to describe the scenario, which makes the story unnecessarily long.- Social interaction between the characters is grade 4, because in many chapters the conversations become artificial.- There are some inconsistencies such as, for example, killing a guard at the city gate in broad daylight and no one noticing.
i don't quite understand how modern weapons which pack a punch more than swords cannot kill your average bandit (he was shot in the eye mind you) while a dull cheap sword can do so and i'd have liked to see MC growing personality wise and his system is more like a merchant business rather than a system which will allow the Host to grow stronger and face challenges its not rewarding
"You didn't admit you were trying to protect me when you followed me to Taewe. Even if you were trying to deceive me, you wouldn't start mentioning how I seem to have trusted you quickly or warn me that you are a dangerous person."
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