The SINNERS

okay I personally at the beginning loved this book. The fact that the MC is a battle maniac, how realistic he seems and that he uses a glaive.It started when he comprehended Chaos there were some scenes where it shows it's importance but also restricts him(I don't know bout it now but I stopped reading at the middle 450s I think) but there was no depth to it after that. Then his strength, he seemed plenty strong at the beginning, he surprised me with sunder the heavens and I was also kinda hoping he'd take space over chaos(it's kinda overused) but it was still good he was ruthless yet realistic and humane, I liked that. But after he leaves started getting a headache his soul is tearing or something he is still in the spirit realm although I personally love OP MCs, I hoped he would grow but he has gone and  grown through countless things that people would never go through and he seem out of character and never grows in strength I understand that growing in realms grows harder the higher you grow but it's been almost 500 chapters and he's still in the spirit or origin realm that's like the second or third realm! I wanna read this book again but I wanna know if anything changed. Please try to respond as fast you can Author.

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so far the story concept is of a cultivator with a interesting system. mc motivation is to save his family. the method.. across the multiverse. fantasy elements mixed with sci-fi elements. a hodgepodge of genres. so far so good.

I don't usually read action when it comes to books, but this is such a great read! So looking forward for Ken's improvements. Amazing plot, although I do feel bad for what happened with Ken's parents.

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