The Ruined World

''Então menino eu gosto de homens eu quero que você use uma fantasia da minha preferência entende? , Eu quero ser fudido pela primeira vez pelo: ''Batman''

"It looks like an Aspear Berry from the games!" I yelled after identifying it.

Marking his territory, daring anyone to go against him.

"It's because you sleep half a week now"

He and his mighty power, split the world into two parts.

Im torn. on one hand, the book is really good. (other than the odd fixation on having the scale of everything seemingly made to be Kilometers, which I question if the author really grasps the scale of how large that is... But it doesn't make the story bad to read, so im ignoring it.) I also appreciate the focus on the story and not making it a harem. pacing feels a bit off at times but overall enjoyable read. On the other hand, this story is about as money hungry as an author could ever be... half the authors' messages are asking for gifts and extra money donations. I understand wanting to make a profit off a book, totally understandable. But after a certain point, it's just ridiculous. I usually buy privilege chapters on stories I enjoy, but this is probably the first story in at least 3 months I refuse to do so. the price for 2 chapters ahead is 50 (most authors had it for unlock cost +1 but sure, thats fine), but then unlocking the 3 after it is over 300? Like seriously? Im all for supporting authors, but that is just insane. Dont even get me started on tier 3 that jumps to over 800 coins.

And she doesn't feel guilty how jealous know lies

the book is quite decent. go ahead and read it.

The story is nice, The character building is okay so far and the cliffhanger is making me want to read the story more and want to know what would happen next, please keep updating you're doing great

I like the concept of having something like rewind. The writer is experienced and has kept his other novel ongoing. It's still too early to know everything about the story and how he will develop it. But I love it and will update my review. He has got my attention, now I will have to see, for how long...

i really like this book, I think it's going good and I look forward to reading more chapters

Its getting steamy... more and more 😝🫣 I can't wait for him to fall in love with the three personalities... seductive Donovan... more of Daddiii Donovan 🎉