The Revenge Of A Rejected Mate

Jah eix am sorry but I have to leave this book. The story line seems nice but the writing is just not upto par for my liking. Too many self thoughts and in a repetitive way, it's bad. More dialogues are so much better than one person thoughts that drag forever  ...

This book has horrible transitions in chapters it jumps all over the place and there is so much left out like in one chapter she’s supposed to start training than in the next chapter it says she has been training. I gave it to chapter 44 and I can’t do it anymore

I remember dropping this around chapter 420, more than half a year ago because the translation became complete dog water which is such a shame since I really enjoyed this novel, and I checked that the novel ended around 1000 chapters but only in mtl and apparently it's unlikely to be picked up by a new TL 😕

This novel needs some serious cleanup and fixing. Almost all introductions to new items/spells or anything with a unique title is missing in the text. Like literally missing! See an example in chapter 187:

"Right at that moment, he opened a piece of paper on the table and started drawing Xu Que smoking his cigarette. When he was done, he titled it - !"

Yes, the sentence ends after the dash and the exclamation mark! This is still an unimportant thing but in the beginning almost all such titles are simply not there, the first time they are introduced. Later it starts becoming better but nonetheless many are still not there.

Author can write 15 chapters explaining 15 minutes of event. Its just that this characteristic of him doesnt show up writing snu snu scenes which is disappointing icl

Semangat
Di tunggu up nya

Awesome intro.... Bravo.
Can't wait to read more

love the series but wish they would finish the books before putting them on