I am trying really hard to like this story but you are making it difficult with all the inconsistencies. it's as if you don't remember what you wrote last time so in the middle of a chapter it just changes. please get an editor to help you. your story has potential.
This book needs a serious edit!!! You can't follow it at all. It's a good story but all over the place, and it seems like she missed several chapters in between chapters.
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