Like many of you, I am also just a fan and an avid reader of light novels who have gone through a lot of imagination everytime I read through the chapters of a story.. so I am not actually a professional writer..This novel is actually my first.. I don’t know, it’s just that one day I started to conceptualize my own idea of cultivation world.. and then inspiration suddenly kicked in to write it down in the midst of my own personal schedule.. and I say my work was way way far from perfect but it was fun doing it..I then took all the courage I could muster just to upload the first few chapters I made about three months ago because I wanted to share what I started to write.. I do feel a bit sad that there are holes in the story that I failed to see which somehow disappointed some of the readers but I don’t feel discouraged at all.. in fact I feel that those things push me to improve this work..So I’m kind of happy how many of the readers reacted to the story especially when some of you even discussed things in the comment section..So thank you, hope you continue reading..Qairi
The story starts of good.But one of the characters is spoiled as hell.No sense of anything.Dumb as hell.Story does not even begin properly.Same old BS every bloody time.Pls do your self a favour and dont read it.Worst story i have read in a while
Just read it. Don't judge the book by reading on the reviews without experiencing it. and Comments should not be less than 140 characters.That is all i want to say.
I must say it is surprisingly good. I know it is might be slow. Here are a few point I want to share: - This is world of magic. I suppose the "Video Game Tag" might be MC think he is transfer into game world full of magic- The world reveal its self as the story progress. It is a bit slow but I didn't mind it.- An insect can be intelligence well that's possible since it is world of magic.- He is in the bottom of the food chain but still he do his best to survive.- All living thing in this novel has special skill and can involve into higher creature.- As I read 60 chapters there are races: dragon, goblin, druid, human, spirit etc.
I will cut one star for the quality of English, because really. But besides this, it's a solid story, an interesting and exciting mix of cultivation and LitRPG, not something I'd ever seen before.
Mandatory shameless author review here: It's a great story with a realistic approach to the cultivation world. There may be a bit of faceslapping, a bit of humor and a bit of crying, but all of it will be done in a way that's not ridiculously obvious and annoying! The overarching story has already been planned from start to end, but how events play out can be influenced by readers feedback so feel free to leave comments on chapters telling what you like or dislike. Either way, it's not a directionless novel going randomly from one arc to the next. Each arc is important, and seemingly mundane characters and events from random chapters may come back as larger twists later so keep an eye out and feel free to theorize how the characters will play an important role later :)
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