The Red Riding Hood

It's really good... Nice start and I hope you continue maintaining it being good... I am waiting for more chapters... A very intriguing story indeed...

Only two chapters and yet one can still tell how much thought has been put in this story. The plot is suspenseful and nail-biting! I personally am addicted to this thriller and mystery genre so I'm no doubt addicted. The main character really draws me towards the background as well! I hope you publish more chapters soon!

This novel is easy to read, chapters aren't so long and the narration are on point and descriptive.  easy language is there and proper diaogues making me to connect.  good work author keep it up

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not bad, but have many failuresMC dumb and idiotdrop chapt 226 your power very slow plot armour and dramaQI 000but is goodbye..

''Plus not to mention about the Zenith race. We creatures of the  Twelve Worlds had once even alliance to fought against them in a long long time ago in which all the races had put down their hate for each other and many Ancestor level characters had even fallen even the Ancient Demon Ancestor had even fallen to protects our kind but even still we could not defeat them.''

(Libby's POV)

"Well-" Charlie pauses. "It had never really crossed our minds, to be honest." He sighs. "You're right, though. The Hermes cabin's a mess. The number of unclaimed campers is increasing and I've heard some are sleeping on the floor now."