Had Cheng Yang heard the muscular man's words, he might not at all feel surprised. After all, he had already known the other side's details from the previous lifetime.
As of chapter 9: A very good story so far. Slow build up in the first couple of chapters but it really kicks into high gear after that initial development. Very good choice of descriptors and good character development make it clear how their personalities dictate their actions. I'm generally not a usual reader of romance, but I can't deny good writing when it's present. If any critique, I'd say there are some issues with switching between past and present tense, making it a bit jarring on first read, but it's not a major problem for those willing to overlook it. I look forward to future chapters!
Story is well written, and has quite a bit of future potential. Just remember this though, if you yourself, enjoy writing your stories, then that is the one thing that should matter the most more then anything else. Sometimes, it is not about any sort of money or payment, but should in fact, always be about enjoying sharing your work with your viewers and fans. And that, should always take priority, because if your fans and viewers enjoy reading your work, as well as potential future generations, then that is the one thing, that should matter more to you then anything else. For you see, people are more concerned in living in the here and now. While people me, we like to have a more, long game in mind. Now, don't take this as some sort of negative by any means, I am just saying, that if we want future generations to enjoy this world, then we have to be willing to protect what we love, in an effort to do our best to better our future.
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