It's a nice novel except I think I'm going to drop it.The power structure has bugged me a lot, everyone is put under their own power system except William, he has his own power structure, meaning it's impossible to know how strong he is on paper. I'd say if you can get over the fact that a goat is his mother, he has Stockholm syndrome, and the power structure means nothing then I'd say go read it.
Well, can you use something like this, ( , ) its like im rapping in my though. Also, can you describe the other characters. You add detail in Monster but not in other characters... Anyway, i like how the story go so far.. I hope you do something!
The very first thing that I noticed when I started to read this were the many grammatical errors. Normally if it's just a few, I wouldn't mind. However, there are enough errors that I had a hard time staying focused on the story itself. The grammar could use quite a bit of improvement. With that said... I do like the Author's creativity with the story. It's definitely something I'm not used to reading, but I would still encourage new readers to give the story a shot.
Read it now or you will regret it. ❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
I love this story!!! Im following it on other sites which is on the 150 something chapter but will support it here too so more people may read it!!💕 Its of a love story and life in the apocalyps without any yaoi sence beyond kissing and ambigious words, so even non yaoi/bl lovers should be able to read it😉 Highly recommend it👍🏻
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