The grammar is pure cancer.
Illegible.
Half words are left and stuck together.
Example:
He finished. After...
Is written as:
He finishfter.
Not to mention the author uses no pronouns.
Literally uses the mc's name 9/10 sentence.
Example:
Yassine looked in horor. He thought this was a spirit. What should he do?
Is written as:
Yassine looked in horror. Yassine thought this was a spirit. What should Yassine do?
For everything. Everything.
Does it get better? Its pure brain damage.
I tried, really tried to like the mc, but I don’t. I don’t see how someone can casually write off sexual molestation as something normal, that honestly irritates me. In case someone wants to say something like ‘oh, the mc is just playing around’, or ‘ it’s not that serious’. Please google is your friend, if you are too lazy to check what sexual molestation is, here’s the meaning ‘ to make unwanted or improper sexual advances towards (someone)
especially : to force physical and usually sexual contact on (someone). What I hate most is an Mc that is supposed to be sensible, acting like a rapist, finding every opportunity to grope or touch the fl. From the summary I should I have realized, didn’t think it was going to be this bad. And if someone is still tryna say I’m overreacting, please bear in mind there are people in this world we have been molested who might come across this book and be triggered. The storyline might be good but the character of the Mc is a huge HELL NO.
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Illegible.
Half words are left and stuck together.
Example:
He finished. After...
Is written as:
He finishfter.
Not to mention the author uses no pronouns.
Literally uses the mc's name 9/10 sentence.
Example:
Yassine looked in horor. He thought this was a spirit. What should he do?
Is written as:
Yassine looked in horror. Yassine thought this was a spirit. What should Yassine do?
For everything. Everything.
Does it get better? Its pure brain damage.
especially : to force physical and usually sexual contact on (someone). What I hate most is an Mc that is supposed to be sensible, acting like a rapist, finding every opportunity to grope or touch the fl. From the summary I should I have realized, didn’t think it was going to be this bad. And if someone is still tryna say I’m overreacting, please bear in mind there are people in this world we have been molested who might come across this book and be triggered. The storyline might be good but the character of the Mc is a huge HELL NO.
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