Hi author, please put a yaoi/trap on your novel i almost puked blood while reading.
Bully#1:"C'mon Reki suck it liked ye always do"
Wutdefkk, ye gave bullies on novels a new paintjob
Hi author, please put a yaoi/trap on your novel i almost puked blood while reading.
Bully#1:"C'mon Reki suck it liked ye always do"
Wutdefkk, ye gave bullies on novels a new paintjob
Hi Everyone, it's the author, just trying something new for me. First time writing something about a system. Ever since I started reading webnovels I fell in love with the system theme, so I tried writing one myself hope you guys like it.
P.S: English ain't my first language so expect errors, sorry about that, I'll try to edit as much as possible.
Hi, love the story by the way, just wanted to write a review to counter some negativity. There has been some misunderstandings about a chapter, making some people write anegative review, about this novel. God if you can't handle such a minor detail the better go back to those senseless things your sue to reading. The novel just added an interesting character called Reki and your bashing that she's gay. Obviously she's not, the author does explain that she is the trap, but if you understand her inner monologue that she is in fact not a trap but a real girl. God its not even a that hard to follow. If your commentating bad things about the character cause of the gay things that means your bot reading properly and just want to rant about **** you dont ubderstand.
I read this after reading all you guys reviews, and what can I say but you guys were right this was nice. Still there was this two guys in the review saying this was gay and ****, but how can they be so wrong. The character Reki was actually hiding a secret basically not being a trap, and just being a real girl you know. I can't believe the one who wrote that review didn't see that, or maybe he just didn't notice, cause he was already blinded by his own fear of homosexuality. Well not saying I like gay, which by the way I don't but still come on can't comment on a story You got no Idea about.
I really like this novel it has an op character that i like and itd not going super fast till now the story isn't explored all that much but from what the author said this arc is just to explore the systems capabilities.
Hi. As a an author trying to establish his/her foothold in this vast ocean, you really did a good job. So far the OP ness of the MC is just right up my alley. It is not too much but rather, just the right amount of spice. I hope that you van incorporate some famous phrases or lines from anime characters to add a bit of comical humor. Like adding condiments to your food. Also, I hope the range of skills and powers is not limited to those used for fighting. Like with other MCs being well versed with 2 or 3 other things (the usual alchemy, forging, formation, etc.) All in all. Its a good story to read. I gave 4 on Story Development for now since I cannot grasp yet where the story is leading too (unless you meant the MC to just be OP on the storyline w/ no setbacks). We look forwars to more chapters. It's a damn good read.
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Bully#1:"C'mon Reki suck it liked ye always do"
Wutdefkk, ye gave bullies on novels a new paintjob
Bully#1:"C'mon Reki suck it liked ye always do"
Wutdefkk, ye gave bullies on novels a new paintjob
P.S: English ain't my first language so expect errors, sorry about that, I'll try to edit as much as possible.