heyo crazy cronie here,review on 01/09/2021 @chap 211(released chap till date: 219)review divided in: Short reviewLong review with ratingsCC rants.ConclusionSHORT REVIEW: A slow paced SOLish where mc accepts disciples with some action & comedy.LONG REVIEW: writing: 9/10 Lil typo mistakes but not to the point where it hinders your reading experience... at least I didn't have any prob. update: 10+2/10 Yeah, deserves more than the max rating... For me 7 ch/week is must for full rating for any original novels and this one releases more than 7plot: 7/10 ^ Don't get me wrong for the low ratings... There is nothing wrong with the story... The world is being slowly introduced to us which is something I really enjoy^ the story is well connected and till now there is no plothole (nothing caught my eyes atleast.)^ But the low rating of this section is because author-chan it seems you forgot the title~ I mean *spoiler* it has been almost 150 chaps he din get any Disciple. *spoiler end* ^ the system hasn't been really explained... Tho it might be done in the future.. for now i dont have any ideaI mean till now I thought it's only related to disciples but suddenly we get different side missions *spoiler* about finding the core of the secret realm and then a survival quest.*spoiler end* ...characters: 8.5/10 Nothing bad... Most characters have their own quirk, but still characters could have been given a little more depth. Till now tho it's good.pacing: 9/10 ^ This is a slow paced novel. And it's really enjoyable reading this... ^ -1 maybe because i feel a little increase in pace would do good? Just my opiniondialogues: 9.5/10 Author did a good job here. People conversing here is one of the things most likeable about this novel.entertainment: 9/10 Welp this is a biased rating since it totally depends upon how much I enjoyed...Overall: 4.5/5 CC rants:-^ Well, first of all I should correct my previous review. This isn't similar to History's no. 1 founder in anyway..... This one leans more towards SOL compared to HN1F which is action packed.^ Secondly this is for ya author-chan~It's high time we have a disciple xD... ^ Also high time MC breakthrough next realm.... ^ This is for the readers... MC is little intelligent compared to other novels so you won't get irritated by his dumbness..^ And well... nothing else keep updating πCONCLUSION:This is one of my weekly pastime... I just stack chaps to read it every weekend...And a must read if you're into SOL type novels...I'll say it once again; there is no romance, harem so to all suckers for this genre stay away... (I'm a sucker for harem and this is one of the few novels I'm reading which doesn't have harem)
Overall its a decent story with nice background and characters sadly i find the story development lacking but its not all that bad, however the worst part about this novel is writing or rather the grammar part... I don't think i need speak more about how horrible the grammar is.
the story looks realy interesting till now. i hope that the author wont take 150 - 200 chapters to get the 2 main Charakters into a full releationship like in his other 2 Stories.i realy like the story till now, yet i fear that the story will be dropped like the other 2 Storys of the author.
This webnovel is simply a must. One of the best ever. Story development is amazing, the MC is superbly written and other characters are just fine(female protagnist could have been improved though), there are a lot of comical scenes due to MC's desire for getting rich. Its my personal fav of Er gen.
Currently reading the first novel and I know I'd like to continue so I'm assuming this will be just as good. Translation quality seems decent. Will be back once first novel is done
Good Story but only 1 chapter a day. For Me the title is damn cool. I hope You won't drop it.πππππππππππππππππππππππ
Aruthos turned serious, "I finally manage to catch their leader. It is bad news. We have only destroyed their scout. Their main forces, totaling at one hundred thousand has not arrived yet. They even have an equipment to destroy planet-level targets..."
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