Read up till 100+ and it sucks. I find the "this daddy" so irritating that it ruins the story for me. The plot seems so pointless that he is fighting almost everyone he meets and somehow ends up defeating them. The only thing that makes him "defeat" everyone he encounters is his plot armor. Without it he'd be nothing but a noisy young master who's so weak he can't even defeat his enemies while their number keeps increasing.
Im going to be honest, started out great... 300 chapters in... well lets just say Im done... too many unused Ideas just thrown in there for filler... and they don't go anywhere... I really liked it at first, maybe some work and this would be amazing...
the synopsis is well written so it must to add to my collection. it tells us about the MC who has many weaknesses. I'm curious what power will the MC get?
Exceptionally great so far. Syntactically a few things might be changed but in general, the story streams exceptionally pleasantly. Some of the time it may be a bit surged but keep going, Really good so far. Well done author!
I read a couple of chapters and I'm completely entranced by your writing style. The imagery is just *chefs kiss* It almost feels like I'm IN the book, experiencing everything Marco is going through. Great work author, definitely looking forward to future updates!!
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